[請益] 英文自介幫看謝謝

看板Eng-Class作者 (steve)時間12年前 (2013/08/06 08:28), 編輯推噓0(006)
留言6則, 2人參與, 最新討論串1/1
It's my pleasure for me to introduce myself. I'm XXX, I come from Yunlin, I graduated from National XX University with Master's Degree and graduated from National XX University with Bachelor Degree. I majored in Chemical Engineering. In schooling, I learned the specialized knowledge and the abilities to solve problems during the research and experiment procedure. In my free time, I like playing badminton. It can release my pressure through the vigorous exercise. The most important of all, I made best friends when I participated the games. Talking about my personality, optimistic and easy-going are the suitable descriptions for me. With any challenge I face it with positive attitude. I will do my best to reach goals no matter how difficult they are. I sincerely hope that I can be offered such a good opportunity. Thanks for your attention. 以上為自己準備的口頭自介, 希望各位大大幫忙修改一下!!謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 163.29.198.125

08/06 11:37, , 1F
有連續的自稱"I"後的第2個以上I可以省略,避免冗長
08/06 11:37, 1F

08/06 11:38, , 2F
另外建議第一句不用for me,因為一開始已經強調是
08/06 11:38, 2F

08/06 11:38, , 3F
"my pleasure"了
08/06 11:38, 3F

08/06 11:42, , 4F
還有"談到"我的人格特質時,不知道是否可改成"When it
08/06 11:42, 4F

08/06 11:43, , 5F
comes to",請板上高人指點!!^_^
08/06 11:43, 5F

08/06 14:40, , 6F
謝謝sky大大!!
08/06 14:40, 6F
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