[請益] 這段英文超短文會語意不通嗎?

看板Eng-Class作者 (科科)時間11年前 (2013/06/12 19:28), 編輯推噓1(102)
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這是我妹寫的超短文, 老師首先提出"The world will be a safer place" 然後要他們簡單論述同意或不同意的觀點 我妹是不同意的, 所以她是這麼寫: "The world will be a safer place." I don't agree with that. Over the last few decades, there are so many unsolved problems on this planet, including limited resources and nuclear threats. It won't be solved. For example, the contest of oil and mines often cause war among countries so countries make a show of the most powerful force. I believe that it's an increasing problem in future because of resources are limited and human desires are limitless. 因為沒有標準答案, 只要求語意和文法通順 無奈本人是英文苦手, 所以來請教各位前輩們 謝謝! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 220.142.127.10

06/13 11:01, , 1F
Including limited resources of ..?
06/13 11:01, 1F

06/13 11:02, , 2F
還有後面 it won't be solved 怪怪的
06/13 11:02, 2F

06/17 00:12, , 3F
over the past few decades sounds better to me
06/17 00:12, 3F
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