[請益] 想問問看 這樣的語意通不通順

看板Eng-Class作者 (geili)時間12年前 (2013/05/17 08:12), 編輯推噓1(1推 0噓 15→)
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some of websites contained too much information, like Yahoo(One of the biggest website), that makes people hard to find the stuff what they want. 這句話這樣寫OK嗎 感謝各位 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 128.238.249.143
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05/17 12:50, , 1F
以你想表達的意思contain 應該沒必要用過去式
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05/17 12:50, , 2F
除非你想表達的是現在不是這樣
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05/17 12:51, , 3F
第二就是請寫 find what they want
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05/17 12:51, , 4F
the stuff what 就重覆了
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05/17 14:47, , 5F
, that makes...--> , which makes...
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05/18 00:21, , 6F
one of the biggest website"s"
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05/18 02:49, , 7F
makes people hard to find是說人很難找 你要說
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05/18 02:50, , 8F
make it hard for people to find what they want.
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05/18 02:50, , 9F
正式寫作的話請避免泛用stuff
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05/18 02:50, , 10F
Some of the websites, like Yahoo, contain too much info
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that makes it hard for people to find what they are looki
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ng for.
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, that make https://daxiv.com
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