[文法] 改寫後文法問題

看板Eng-Class作者時間13年前 (2013/03/27 16:43), 編輯推噓0(001)
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The tumultuous days of the late Yuan, the theme of the fisherman symbolized an escape from their strife-torn world. Wang Fu, a fellow townsman of Ni Zan, had been a wanderer in exile. In this scroll he echoes Wu Zhen's treatment of the fisherman theme. Poised between descriptive realism and calligraphic abstraction, he's painting exemplifies how Ming, Qing scholar- artists expressed themselves through the brush idioms of the Song, Yuan masters. 上文是將原文改寫後以便背誦用,不知道單字用法及文法有沒有要修改的地方? 先謝謝大家的幫忙! -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 112.104.163.39

03/27 22:20, , 1F
exile不適用在這吧,這字有外力強迫的意涵
03/27 22:20, 1F
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