[文法]試著用英文打網誌

看板Eng-Class作者 (Renee天天)時間13年前 (2012/09/25 07:36), 編輯推噓2(203)
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Today~my host mother will be late when she finished work~so she told to me if I didn't want wait for her~I could make dinner to myself~and I used microwave to make this~because I worried my host mother when she watched me to open the gas stove~certainly~she didn't teach me yet~haaaaa~all in all~to made this just only spend 3 minute ~I called this to"mother and child egg"haaaa celebrate my first timeY(^_^)Y If I used wrong grammar,please instruct to me~thx(︿ω︿) 請大大幫我糾正錯誤的地方>W< 希望可以更精進自己的文法X -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 174.116.164.227

09/25 09:17, , 1F
放著正確的標點符號不用,滿篇都是 tilde
09/25 09:17, 1F

09/25 09:34, , 2F
既然是第一次寫,不要太自作聰明,同樓上,請用普通的標點
09/25 09:34, 2F

09/25 10:49, , 3F
wimpy kids好看又好笑,多看多學有幫助
09/25 10:49, 3F

09/25 17:37, , 4F
http://lang-8.com/ 這網站可以打網誌
09/25 17:37, 4F

09/25 17:37, , 5F
外國人會幫你修改 這網站挺有趣的
09/25 17:37, 5F
文章代碼(AID): #1GOEw07w (Eng-Class)