[求譯] 健康檢查須請假一天

看板Eng-Class作者 (Brand new year)時間13年前 (2012/05/13 15:05), 編輯推噓1(108)
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下周一我要去醫院做健康檢查預計需請假一天, 如果提早結束會盡快回來工作。 Next Monday I need to take probably one day off to go to hospital for physical examination. Will be back to work if it can ends earlier than expected. ------ 試著翻譯如上, 想請教文法和語意是否有錯誤的地方? 謝謝 :) -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 61.217.172.12

05/13 22:31, , 1F
1.probably是副詞,通常放動詞前;2.physical可數;3.如果
05/13 22:31, 1F

05/13 22:33, , 2F
是email、熟人等較不正式場域,第二句缺主詞可;4.加"can"
05/13 22:33, 2F

05/13 22:34, , 3F
是台式、中式英文用法
05/13 22:34, 3F

05/13 22:34, , 4F
I may need to take a day off for a physical next Monday
05/13 22:34, 4F

05/13 22:36, , 5F
Will be back to work if it ends earlier than expected.
05/13 22:36, 5F

05/13 22:40, , 6F
語意表達無誤,翻得不錯。只有文法需要一些cosmetic tweak.
05/13 22:40, 6F

05/14 12:25, , 7F
謝謝!!台式英文習慣真的很難改!
05/14 12:25, 7F

05/14 16:38, , 8F
I wondered if a leave for physical examination
05/14 16:38, 8F

05/14 16:38, , 9F
on Monday is possible.
05/14 16:38, 9F
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