[請益] 不好意思~補上自介內容

看板Eng-Class作者 (草莓心)時間14年前 (2012/01/30 23:07), 編輯推噓2(2016)
留言18則, 5人參與, 最新討論串1/1
Good morning everyone. I’m Fansi . I am very glad to be here for your interview. I was born in Hsinchu. I graduated from National Hsinchu University of Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to work as a preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. Now I am a housekeeper and live in Taipei with my husband . I‘m easygoing and friendly . In my spare time, I like to see a movie、travel 、cook and read books. I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meat more people and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation can realize my dream. So that’s why I am here. Thank you for your attention. -- .........叫我小花就對了*^ ^* -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 112.104.98.47

01/30 23:16, , 1F
1.see a movie->watch movies,2.遇見:meet非meat
01/30 23:16, 1F

01/30 23:17, , 2F
cook後面是想表達閱讀嗎?若是,個人覺得reading更好
01/30 23:17, 2F

01/30 23:18, , 3F
個人看到的一些小問題,有講錯歡迎指正。
01/30 23:18, 3F

01/30 23:19, , 4F
我覺得一般的自我介紹和job interview的有分別...
01/30 23:19, 4F

01/30 23:20, , 5F
我覺得你應該要站在工作角度來強調你的過去經驗的連結
01/30 23:20, 5F

01/30 23:22, , 6F
關於前面個人背景簡介提到家管還有老公這點建議省略..
01/30 23:22, 6F

01/30 23:48, , 7F
謝謝各位的建議,我會修改的
01/30 23:48, 7F

01/30 23:54, , 8F
不過之前做的是幼教,可能跟高鐵的工作較沒友直接的相關
01/30 23:54, 8F

01/31 01:07, , 9F
我覺得你可以從幼教工作的熱忱和奉獻犧牲來表達的妳的
01/31 01:07, 9F

01/31 01:08, , 10F
服務態度,會是一個亮點。面試常常是一個點打對了...
01/31 01:08, 10F

01/31 01:08, , 11F
就找到工作了...
01/31 01:08, 11F

01/31 08:34, , 12F
推k大。雇主不會在乎你可不可以『實現你的夢想』。他們在乎
01/31 08:34, 12F

01/31 08:35, , 13F
的是雇用你可不可以對公司有幫助。
01/31 08:35, 13F

01/31 08:35, , 14F
所以最後一段要重寫。
01/31 08:35, 14F

01/31 15:56, , 15F
...其實我覺得電影、旅遊那些都可以不提,除非和工作有
01/31 15:56, 15F

01/31 15:56, , 16F
相關性,如海外旅遊增進和國際人士的溝通和了解...
01/31 15:56, 16F

08/06 07:09, , 17F
不過之前做的是幼教,可 https://muxiv.com
08/06 07:09, 17F

09/06 23:40, , 18F
不過之前做的是幼教,可 https://daxiv.com
09/06 23:40, 18F
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