[請益] 英文詩修改
For You
Thank you for accompanying me
And loving me for such a long time
So happy these years i used to be
Though sometimes hopeless climb
To have a romance with you,i was dreaming
A little girl have a crush on you
But she hid her feeling
Of falling in love with you
She forgot those embarrassing thing
Of the past, because you
A little girl dare not thinking
Of have a cuddle from you
Things happend unexpectly
We began our relationship in the summer
But we fought over trifling things easily
The frist time we fought, you wrote a letter
Told me your sadness gently
And hope me have a better future
And this time, maybe the last time we fought
You told me the same, and i want to say
Im happy you are the same guy, i thoght
I will miss you until the day
I love someone else, you're the one i never forgot
這是我自己寫的...但我不知道這樣押韻對不對
麻煩有研究的人給我一點意見
或是有那些地方需要改的
謝謝大家^^!!
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