[修正] Commentaries about animal's language …

看板Eng-Class作者 (小亦)時間14年前 (2011/06/15 19:35), 編輯推噓1(104)
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可以請板上各位大大幫我評閱一下嗎? 規定是不能用太簡單的字 我不知道我這樣寫有沒有錯誤,或者是說有些用法可以修改的 以下都是我根據同學的presentation自己寫出來的心得 希望得到各位大大的指教,非常感謝^^ ----------------------- Communication-animal The most impressive is that he mentions each animals grin having their special means,taking an instance,it's express friendly emotion,but for chinpanzee may show fear,and when wolves grin ,indicating it will take action to attack you. The other example, stretching out hand or palm also express different emotions to each the three animals.While a man give his hand to you he must show his welcome,for chinpanzee may as well show its scare like grinning,and final animal,wolf,meaning obedibnt to you.It's extremely fascinating to interpret animal's language,no matter their guestures,voice,actions or facial expression, it help us to learn more informations about them.I recall Japan continue to work on interpreting animal's language,they invent a new machine hanging on puppies necks then the mechine will show how they feel on the screen.It's such a useful device to unstand what they eager to do,and get close to your pets. And it's only a tiny area of application.Maybe we will start to interpret the language for plants in the forture due to that every lives in this blue plaint are destroyed whlie facing a critical situation.As the result,we must attempt to tighten the relationship with lives to keep suitable balance with nature mother. -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 120.107.174.101

06/16 04:25, , 1F
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06/16 09:39, , 2F
請重排版一下。
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06/16 12:10, , 3F
第一句的 motion 是 mention 嗎 ? 而且應該要加 s 吧 XD
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06/16 12:10, , 4F
如果你是想說 mentions 的話, 後面的 that 可以省略
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06/16 12:11, , 5F
不然一行一下就兩個 that 有點多餘
06/16 12:11, 5F
謝謝ke大,我沒注意到那個,已訂正了^^ ※ 編輯: crystaloud 來自: 120.107.174.101 (06/16 22:04)
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