[請益] Resume & cover letter 文法問題

看板Eng-Class作者 (我是笨蛋)時間14年前 (2011/06/08 11:34), 編輯推噓0(0010)
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各位好 :) 因為要應徵一間跨國企業的客戶開發工程師~ 它需求英文跟專業能力挺高的 我很努力的寫完cover letter 跟 resume 可是我的文法跟寫作能力跟native speaker 還是差了一大截~ -- 如果有版友願意幫忙 我會奉上僅剩的一點點P幣~ 如果您在新竹的話我會願意請您喝杯飲料 QQ -- resume 可能需要幫忙的字句 Objective: I noticed that there is a XXX opening; I am looking forward to the opportunity, which is able to work in my dram company and with people internally. Experience: Instrument analysis experiment teaching assistant * Helping student to understand basic theory of analysis instruments. * Instruments troubles shooting. Organic Chemistry experiment teaching assistant * Helping student understand basic concept of organic chemistry. * Solving emergency or dangers situation occur by experiment. -- -- 因為~cover letter全部貼上來我怕會讓大家沒有耐心 QQ~ 所以~請願意幫忙的版友~丟我水球~ 我會再寄信給您~ 謝謝~~~ -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 163.22.18.23

06/08 14:51, , 1F
there is an opening for XXX(job title吧?)
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06/08 14:52, , 2F
which is *to be* able to work in my *dream* company
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06/08 14:52, , 3F
with people internally是甚麼意思? 這樣寫不太清楚 在
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06/08 14:53, , 4F
某一個地方裡面"應該不是你想表達的意思吧 :P
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06/08 14:57, , 5F
experience部份可能應該把Teaching Assistant放在前面
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06/08 14:58, , 6F
因為英文這麼寫有點太囉囌的感覺,不知道position到底叫啥
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06/08 14:59, , 7F
然後*的,要用現在式或過去式,如Helped students或Help
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06/08 14:59, , 8F
dangers -> dangerous. 最後,把Instruments trouble-
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06/08 15:00, , 9F
shooting改成Trouble-shoot(那是現在式,不知道哪一個適合
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06/08 15:00, , 10F
你工作情況) 希望有幫上忙~ ^^
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