[文法] 前面這樣子會很怪嗎???
It's an extremely beautiful day.
The bird was singing, the wind was dancing, and the sun was smiling
when everyone woke up. We went to Danshui with our professor to know
more about Dr. Mackay's story in Formosa. Dr. Mackay arrived at Danshui
in 1872. He said "that there seemed to be an invisible line that led him
to this spectacular island. So today our priority target is to know more
about Dr. Mackay's story and to see the beautiful island in Danshui.
這只是第一段，
請問前面那樣子好像怪怪的 ==，該怎麼修改好><"
第一次寫作文....Orz...
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