[請益] 自己寫的英文自介請幫我看一下

看板Eng-Class作者lenta (Blue)時間15年前 (2010/12/14 18:00)推噓2(2推 0噓 14→)

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因為是自介不是履歷所以比較簡短我是新鮮人所以比較沒提到工作經歷請幫我看有什麼地方可以改進或是有文法錯誤..||| 感謝 My name is XXX. 26 years old. I was born in Taichung. There are 5 members in my family: father, mother, 2 sisters ,and I. My father and mother and my older sister run a small business. My younger sister is studying in high school. I graduated from XXX University last year and dischargd from the Army in November. My major in the university is XXX. Thanks to many required and optional courses, I gained all-around knowledge in XXX. Since my family couldn't afford my living expense, I worked on a part-time job in a convenient store for nearly 2 years. I become more and more out-going, optimistic and learned lots of ways to release my pressure during the contact with customers, co-workers, and of course, supervisors. The recreation activities I enjoy are seeing movies, KTV, and several kinds of sports. My opinion for life is no one could quit learning. Since the world changes rapidly, today's high-tech technologies are out-dated tomorrow. Every one should dedicate himself for progress, unless himself would be hardly to survive. 順便請教這樣會太短嗎?? -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.41.142.204

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