Re: [請益] 一句話的修飾

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※ 引述《potentiality ( )》之銘言: : 請問以下這句話,可以如何修改,才不會一直重複which呢? : (除了把Which 改成前方的名詞外) : 真是想好久阿... : 謝謝! : In this course, I emphasized the importance of clarity : in English writing, which is very different from Chinese writing, : which values the style of poetic obscurity. In this course, I emphasized that English writing values the importance of clarity, while Chinese writing the style of poetic obscurity. -- plz correct me if i'm wrong -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 58.114.75.15
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