[請益] 一封推薦函，拜託高手替我修改文法

看板Eng-Class作者mediant (大理石噴水池)時間15年前 (2010/11/26 12:16)推噓0(0推 0噓 15→)

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這是一封推薦函，拜託板上的高手替我看看，有沒有文法怪怪的地方，非常謝謝大家！ ______ To whom it may concern: I am writing this letter with great pleasure to recommend Miss XXX XX to your Master of Music program for the 20XX Fall Semester. I have taught Miss XXX XX for more than two years. Miss XX, in my professional opinion as her teacher, is a gifted student with great potential. In the past two years, I found that she made huge progress in a short time. She has natural musical instinct and great innate feeling, and also equipped with playing facility and good techniques. Besides, she always showed her passion for music and active motivation to be outstanding. I am convinced that XXX is a qualified candidate for admission to your respect program and deserves your favorable consideration - I strongly believe that with her talent and strong desire to learn, XXX will make much more progress in the study of graduate level. Therefore, I am willing to offer my most enthusiastic recommendation. Sincerely yours, XXXX XXXX MM of XXXXX School of Music Cellist, XXXXXX Orchestra ※ 編輯: mediant 來自: 61.216.1.230 (11/26 12:18)

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