[請益] 請給小弟的短文一些建議^^
這篇是小弟剛寫完的短文，在遣詞用字上仍很生澀，
可以的話，希望能幫指出一些該改進的地方，謝謝。
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The Purpose
The subject of this project is to introduce campus lives in English and make
a short film to show it lively in detail. Therefore, our team came up with an
idea, which we could make a story including famous and historical roles. In
the story, the main role would meet these special and legendary figures,
introducing our school for them. On the other hand, we made two functions for
students, as the other aim is for teaching. For instance, first of all, there
are two different versions of the film to train students’ hearing. One has
the subtitles while the other doesn’t. Second, after watching the film,
students could track the vocabularies they don’t know on the PowerPoint or
written paper composed of difficult words and illustrative sentences.
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