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Nonverbal communication, or body language, is used everywhere in the world.
It is a very powerful means of communication because it communicates much
more than spoken words.
One example of nonverbal communication is what occurs between parents
and child. When parents smile at their child, they communicate love,
acceptance, and reassurance, so the child feels comfortable and safe. Because
the smile signifies approval, the child is happy and well adjusted.
Another example of nonverbal communication is the image a person shows
in public. Such as a woman is walking alone on an unfamiliar and possibly
dangerous street. She wants to appear confident so she walks quickly. She may
be tired because she walks with her shoulders straight and her head held
high, and her eyes are focused straight ahead. While someone is looking at
her, she returns the glance without hesitation. In contrast, a nervous woman
appears afraid, so she walks slowly with her shoulders and eyes down.
Indeed, body language can express more than spoken language. Merely by
raising an eyebrow, clenching a jaw , or softening the eyes, a person can
express disapproval, anger, or love. So it is a very strong method of
communication.
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Sexism extends even into the area of automobile driving, it seems.
Believing that they are far better drivers than women. Men consider women
drivers incompetent, inattentive, and even dangerous behind the wheel.
However, statistics prove that women are, in fact, safer drivers than
men. For example, insurance rates. Insurance rates for women are 20 percent
lower than they are for men. Another proof is that more accidents are caused
by male drivers between the ages of 18 and 25 than by any other group. Also,
the greater percentage of accidents involving deaths caused by men. Although
women are criticized for being too cautious. They are really just being safe
drivers.
The reasons for women drivers’ safer habits can perhaps be found in the
differing attitudes of the sexes toward automobiles. Like a washing machine.
On the other hand, men regard the automobile as an extension of their egos.
Using it as a weapon when they feel particularly aggressive. Or using it as a
status symbol.
All in all, women are safer drivers. Because of their attitude. Men can
learn to become safe drivers. If they adopt the attitude that an automobile
is merely a convenience.
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