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請看一下我連接詞有沒有放錯!
A robot is a mechanical device that can perform boring, dangerous, and
difficult tasks. First of all, robots can perform repetitive tasks without
becoming tired or bored, so they are used in automobile factories to weld and
paint. Second, robots can also function in hostile environments, and they are
useful for exploring the ocean bottom as well as deep outer space. Finally,
robots can perform tasks requiring pinpoint accuracy. In the operating room,
robotic equipment can assist the surgeon; for instance, a robot can kill a
brain tumor, beside it can operate on a fetus with great precision.
The field of artificial intelligence is giving robots a limited ability
to think and to make decisions; however, robots cannot think conceptually and
function independently. Humans have to program them; otherwise, they are
useless. Therefore, humans should not worry that robots will take over the
world-at least not yet.
這裡幫我看標點符號對不對!
1.Information and communication technology is reaching out to help people in
the poorest countries improve their lives; for example, fishermen on the Bay
of Bengal can now receive online weather reports that tell them when it is
safe to go out.
2.Furthermore, when the fishermen bring in a boatload of fish, they can find
out the current market prices for their fish, which will help them bargain
with the middlemen to whom they sell their catch.
3.The cost of the cheapest computer is at least $200, and since this is more
than an individual, fishermen can afford several fishing villages together;
can pool their money and buy one to share.
4.The worldwide reach of the Internet is also providing employment
opportunities in developing countries, and as greater numbers of people learn
the technology these opportunities will expand.
5.When you call your U.S. bank, you may find yourself speaking to a customer
service representative who is sitting in the Philippines or Puerto Rico; and
when you need technical support for your home computer, you will probably get
help from a programmer in New Delhi.
這裡是要把after,although,because,when加進去
這樣放對嗎?
Russian women started to gain equality earlier than women in the United
States. The concept of equal rights and responsibilities for women was part
of communist philosophy, so Russians of both sexes had equal access to
education and jobs from the beginning of the Soviet Union. The 1937 Soviet
constitution declared that women and men had equal rights and
responsibilities, but women in the United States do not have legal equality
even today. Although an amendment to the U.S. Constitution giving women equal
rights has never been approved. Because before World War Ⅱ, few U.S. women
worked outside the home. When millions of men left to become soldiers during
the war, and women took over their jobs. Suddenly, women discovered that they
could do anything, after the men returned home, and women began to demand the
equality that they had earned.
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