由於我的英文程度實在很差...
我自己寫完這篇後，念起來覺得很不順，
也知道自己有非常多的錯誤要改。(只是不知道怎麼改 Q_Q)
因為是要用說的，
所以想請教板上的達人幫我修改一下，
讓口說更順一點...
謝謝大家了!
When I was a little boy.I was very naughty child.
One day,I went to go fishing at my home nearby pond.
I usually sat under the tree,then wait to fishing.
When I stood and throw the bait,my hip collide with behind the tree.
Then I fall in the pond.
The pond's water was very deep and I felt fear.
Therefore I was loud shouted "Help me"!
At this moment has a man,he jumped heroic and salvage me.
I thought immediately he was a hero,and he was so shine in my eyes.
覺得真的很差，請用力鞭我，沒關係!
這樣我才能進步，謝謝。
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