[文法] 這兩句文法正確嗎?

看板Eng-Class作者 (supernatural)時間14年前 (2010/06/28 20:12), 編輯推噓1(1推 0噓 4→)
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She accidentally ate a carton of chocolate that your boss want to give to his client. Her boss is very angry,but he don t know who eat chocolate. He ordered that his employee work overtime. 請問這兩句這樣寫正確嗎? 有錯的話幫糾正 謝謝 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.37.69.104 ※ 編輯: supernatural 來自: 114.37.69.104 (06/28 20:25)
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06/29 21:23, , 1F
she accidentally ate a box of chocolates that your
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boss wants to give to his client(s).
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Her boss is very angry, but he doesn't know what ate
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it. So he ordered his employees to work overtime.
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(第一句的your boss是不是要改成her boss?)
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