[求譯] 請問一個句子的翻法

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求中譯／英譯：英譯 句子，原意大概是： 某公司今年前五月就達成了去年整年業績的70%。 我的試譯： The company has achieved revenue as much as 70% of last year's in the first five months of this year. 提問：請問有更好的翻法嗎??這個翻法怎麼看都會被電… -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 203.74.250.33
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06/24 14:33, , 1F
The company's total sales figure is 70% more than that of
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對不起重寫：
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With only five months in 2010, the company's sales figure
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already 70% of that in the entire 2009.
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"is already"
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The company's first-five-month sales this year
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has capped 70% of last-year sales.
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