[求譯] 創造歷史 請大家幫我翻 謝謝
求英譯：
句子：XX活動是我們公司第一次嘗試,已為我們公司寫下歷史的新頁。
我的試譯：XX is the first try for our company. It has made a history of 公司名.
提問： 感覺好像很中式英文.但我曾聽老外總經理鼓勵大家時說叫大家為自己創造歷史時
說到"make a history of yourself."
那時還特別記起來.但不確定是否真的可以這樣用.
還是of要改成for呢?
請各位前輩指導
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