[心得] 關於王小苗的詞
寫這一篇 純粹因為我很生氣
有些詞很直白 就是平庸
有些詞簡約卻有味道 就是高段
有些詞想創詞來表達不同的視野 卻落得辭不達意時 就是失敗
聽完這首歌 可以感受出
當一個人辜負了對方 卻擺出瀟灑的姿態 心底又飽受折磨時 就哭了
(作曲加分 尤其是後段)
意境個人解讀 不一定要讓人懂 但最起碼字詞的脈絡要說得通啊
上一首讓我如此生氣的歌詞 就是淘汰
讓人生氣是因為
明明是好聽的旋律線
鳥詞卻不得不從Eason的嘴裡不斷跑出來
這種風格的詞
說穿了
就是把一個簡單的概念用自以為很屌的文字表現出來
完全排除詞彙應用的合理性
以為自己在寫新詩
結果什麼屁都不是
真的想寫新詩 去看看1976阿凱 薄荷糖小倩的詞或是雷光夏的詞嘛
如果是王小苗或是青峰派的 請海涵
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所以高中生,就是化為家畜的第一步.
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