[創作] Angle's Voice

看板Create作者 (高三晃阿晃...)時間19年前 (2005/09/26 20:03), 編輯推噓1(1推 0噓 1→)
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One day I heard a voice from the sky Sound happily and lively make me smile I think that is angle singing in the sky I think it is angle’s voice One day I heard a voice from the sky Like to pray and bless I always fun I think that is angle singing in the sky I think it is angle’s voice She said don’t cry, my little child I’ll forever with you and pray for you When you feel alone you’ll hear my voice An angle’s voice from the sky 第一次創作... 可能寫的不太好... 還請諸位前輩多多指較內<(－／／／／／－)> -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 59.113.17.58
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09/28 11:27, , 1F
感覺還不錯 不過 文法要注意一下喔
09/28 11:27, 1F
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09/29 23:46, , 2F
到底是angel還是angle????
09/29 23:46, 2F
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