[問題] 請問我畫的真的讓人很看不懂?
我最近因為自己的興趣,有稍微在畫漫畫,
目前只畫到第三面的草稿,
我請一些人看,有一些人的反應是完全看不懂?
例如有人問我地板是不是都裂開的?
有人問我說那個人手裡拿的是不是伸縮樂樂棒球棒?
有人問我他怎麼看起來好像有點老(就是畫他老啊...)
有人說裡面的台詞看不懂,
我自己知道目前故事對此人的解釋還很少,畢竟只有三面
可是應該至少還是看得出有關於這個人的一些信息吧?
台詞應該也不會看不懂什麼意思吧...
我是真的畫得這麼爛喔...?
這是我畫的...
第一面:
http://i.imgur.com/pChIIcA.jpg
第三面(草圖):
http://imgur.com/eTyfTNF
我自己覺得看完三面應該會得到的基本信息是:
1.此人可能需要錢
2.此人擁有某方面可以在比賽獲得大量金錢的才能
3.此人看起來老
4.他跳(或跑)出去然後地板被踩爆了
5.他手上拿著手電筒而不是樂樂棒球的球棒
(聽到樂樂棒這個問題還蠻生氣的,畢竟看起來還算是嚴肅的作品吧?怎麼可能是拿
樂樂棒?你會問鳥山明七龍珠裡的人手掌拖著的東西都是香菇嗎?幽助手
指頭那個是棉花糖嗎?這種問題是要故意惹人生氣嗎?)
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