Fw: [問題] 這段自介是否很爛?

看板CareerLady作者 (婊)時間10年前 (2013/10/31 23:34), 編輯推噓3(302)
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※ [本文轉錄自 Wanted 看板 #1ISdTHqQ ] 作者: lifespan (婊) 看板: Wanted 標題: [問題] 這段自介是否很爛? 時間: Thu Oct 31 23:29:17 2013 My name is XX. I was graduated from XX univ. with a BA in public administration which is related to Politics, Management and Law. Past I was an international sales person. I sucessfully developed customer base and got ten million dollers order. My interest is reading, seeing movies, shopping or anything else for example outdoor activities. My personality is careful and open-minded.. 面試蠻爛的..沒望了 有請高手改善 職務是法務助理(X銀) 不曉得應徵法務要注意啥? -- 123p大番薯 好好吃! -- 這樣就浪費一篇扣打 不知道有沒有會算命的 1.算壽命 2.算姻緣 3.算命裡有沒有孩子 生命線很小又細,智慧線短半,事業線分兩叉..兜售。 -- ※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 114.42.140.118

10/31 23:33, , 1F
Movie不是要用watch嗎?
10/31 23:33, 1F
※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ※ 轉錄者: lifespan (114.42.140.118), 時間: 10/31/2013 23:34:11

11/01 12:45, , 2F
凡助理都要細心 你的自傳看起來是個急躁的人耶
11/01 12:45, 2F

11/02 16:23, , 3F
看來像中文式英文
11/02 16:23, 3F

11/02 19:03, , 4F
graduated 是動詞,再加be動詞變被動…
11/02 19:03, 4F

11/02 20:11, , 5F
Be動詞拿掉
11/02 20:11, 5F

11/03 17:46, , 6F
was 刪掉
11/03 17:46, 6F
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