[17春] Re:creator 1~10 斧鑿斑斑已回收
在築城院真鑒俏皮的姿勢下,故事上半段告一段落
這十話的心得簡而言之就是: 斧鑿斑斑
太多為演而演的劇情...
一開始的設定其實非常有趣,日本近年有大量穿越劇,而且幾乎都穿越到異世界
這種虛擬人物反穿越到現實世界與作者.與現實世界展開一段故事 相信在開季可以吸引
到許多目光。
然而他的亮點對我來說就只有設定而已...演出只能用淒慘來形容
好在有煌樹茉美香,否則早就看不下去了...
BUT 就是這個BUT
煌樹茉美香的死亡劇情無疑問的又是官方一個大笑話
為了製造第九與第十話的衝突
魔法少女之死成為了導火線,但這導火線的演出與後續發展真的讓人翻白眼
首先煌樹茉美香很不自然的要去"單獨"挑戰阿爾泰爾
留下愛麗絲特莉婭一人對其背影呼喊其名,結果就是說服失敗被阿爾泰爾秒殺
在編劇刻意的安排下煌樹茉美香,瀕死的飛了一段距離後
遇到了築城院真鑒,並將所有事情都告訴她
然後愛麗絲特莉婭一副便當吃到一半,被編劇叫到戲場,從天而降,前來聆聽少女遺言
結果...煌樹茉美香突然被編劇下藥,長達10句遺言
只能不斷重複拜託與艾莉絲醬...一句"阿爾泰爾捅我的"都說不出來
艾莉絲醬一個沙場老將聽得淚流滿面,在我看來就是那表情彷彿在述說
艾莉絲: 少女阿...哩勒工殺小...
接著就是大家都猜的到,艾莉絲被戲弄,搞錯兇手是誰
"艾莉絲矛頭指向米特奧拉"的劇情我可以接受,但演出的手法真的非常差
讓人不禁懷疑艾莉絲在她的世界是不是個莽夫?
主人公 水篠颯太的軟弱表現讓這作品令人反感的情緒又添上一筆
這種讓主人公軟弱導致事事都慢一步,來讓反派得以推進劇情
實在讓人看得又憋扭又膩...
更別提為了讓劇情可以演到22話而無限制的削弱正方
築城院真鑒根本最強混沌角色,有輕鬆戲弄彌勒寺優夜的體術與編劇想讓劇情怎麼
發展就能怎麼發展的能力,不意外的話這名角色最後會死於老馬
個人原本預期這作品想表達的是兩派人馬的衝突並且不帶有過於明顯的正反色彩,
探討二創角, 網路霸凌, 觀眾人氣, 主流作品的影響等社會現象
結果只看到莫名其妙的戰鬥與斧鑿痕跡明顯的演出
青木英想洗刷A/Z的失敗? 我只能說下次再來
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※ 編輯: AKARA (220.132.82.35), 06/11/2017 19:16:30
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這種黑色幽默的笑點我是滿喜歡的,後續就....
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這作品是出發點就是無腦嗎QQ 難道我一開始就入錯坑了
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我以為這種搞砸手法通常是監督的問題...我看劇本統籌除了廣江禮威也有青木英
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22集完結再回來補比較好,可能也可以不用補了...
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