Re: [實況] 擇天記
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別樣紅看著她微笑說道:“師妹,很抱歉不能再陪你了。”
無窮碧更加驚慌,伸手抓住他的衣取,尖聲說道:“你在胡說什麼!”
別樣紅歎了口氣,說道:“我沒有胡說。”
無窮碧臉色變得蒼白起來,因為緊張而舌頭打結,說話變得有些斷續:
“那你也不能瞎說。”
別樣紅說道:“我沒有瞎說。”
無窮碧驚恐至極地喊道:
“我不準你走,不然……不然我就去把關白那隻手也砍了!不然……我就去投靠魔族!”
“我曾經想過請教宗大人把我帶走,只留封休書給你。但我知道你肯定還是能猜到我
死了,那還不如明說……”
別樣紅憐惜地摸了摸她的臉,說道:“因為你知道我不會不要你啊。”
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別樣紅太MAN了,好感度直接刷到滿星呀!!!!!
這章讓小弟這個別樣紅小粉絲看了好難過,這種情節貓膩真的駕馭得很好。
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※ 編輯: jubeat0219 (111.242.47.231), 09/10/2016 17:18:07
※ 編輯: jubeat0219 (111.242.47.231), 09/10/2016 17:18:29
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我覺得蘇離寫的不是很好,感覺存在感比將夜的柯浩然還低。
反而別樣紅的鋪墊很完整,角色人物塑造很好,整本書也因為他而繽紛了起來,
雖然他妻子被世人所厭惡,但也依然敬她愛她,
獨子被殺,即使心中恨意滔天,但是還能分清是非,有著自己的底線。
這角色太苦,妻子被人詬病、獨子被殺也無法成功報仇,
最後想吃個蔥花牛肉餡的包子、但還是撐不到那時候。
貓膩塑造配角的能力確實一流,相對於他的主角,配角綻放的光芒真是有夠燦爛的。
※ 編輯: jubeat0219 (122.117.254.186), 09/11/2016 12:47:24
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