Re: [實況] 一世之尊
這本書差不多快寫崩啦
誅仙劍陣被搞的跟大白菜一樣
每役必與,每場大戰都在誅仙劍陣
看都看膩了 大殺招搞的有夠廉價
前面人物都跟孟奇等級差太多
全部路人龍套化
而小桑孟奇這對假面夫婦
互稱夫婦,卻又不熟,
在那試探來試探去
看他們互動真是有夠痛苦
既不能完全互信,只在言語裝親膩
真不知寫這種情侶意義在那?
彼岸對奕又實在瞎爆
又不乾脆醒來幹一場,
在那邊你留個手尾,我丟個寶物
搞些有的沒的讓孟奇小偵探發現
然後顯現彼岸的博弈這樣?
偶一為之還可
這種彼岸留手尾解迷當博弈的橋段
變成常態劇情
實在讓人覺得彼岸有無那麼無聊啊?
這幾話 把前面人物 玉虛宮全部爆掉
我猜作者自己也快受不了要準備收了吧
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