[問題] 對聯
最近國文課老師出了一道題目.就是用自己的名子來造一句對聯
右聯:國XXXXXX 左聯:益XXXXXX
我有想到一個: 右聯: 國旺家興開運景 左聯:益民富貴聚祥和
感覺沒有很順,希望可以提供我一些建議或哪邊需要改進的,謝謝!
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