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[請教] 兩張逼近0分的海報
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修改過的版本
海報的主題是太空船
今天拿給老師看新版本的時候 老師說"只有改善一點點 根本的問題沒有解決"
可是我不知道我自己最大的問題是什麼- -|||
所以 我想請板上的人給我ㄧ點意見和指教
PS.現在有想到的問題是 畫面的構成性很薄弱
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